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Thanks for the feedback! I'm kinda confused though. I'm just curious as to how it's not original. Oh, and did you read all three of them or just that one? Because I know that Temperature isn't very original. And what do you mean by how I treat it? I'm sorry if I sound defensive, I just was wondering if you could explain a little further so I know what to watch out for later. 
Anyway, thanks so much!
Anyway, thanks so much!No you're not defensive, I know that what I said isn't really nice.
Butyou wrote a love poems, and I've read so many poems like yours only on DA. I don't said that is a bad poems, not at all, butsomething that I can read in hundread exemplar isn't really original.
But I've don't read many poems on Da, I'm maybe wrong.
And for the way you treat the content, you talk directly about love, there is no real subtlety.
It's a style of poem that I don't really like, I don't know what you're goal in writting so I said you my ownopinion and why I don't like it.
Butyou wrote a love poems, and I've read so many poems like yours only on DA. I don't said that is a bad poems, not at all, butsomething that I can read in hundread exemplar isn't really original.
But I've don't read many poems on Da, I'm maybe wrong.
And for the way you treat the content, you talk directly about love, there is no real subtlety.
It's a style of poem that I don't really like, I don't know what you're goal in writting so I said you my ownopinion and why I don't like it.
Ok, well I'm not really sure how to change that, but thanks anyway! It's good to know I'll keep it in mind Oh and you might want to refresh your english in some of your stuff by the way because you use some of the tenses are wrong and a lot of the nouns you use don't match. But anyway thanks
I'll keep it in mind Oh and you might want to refresh your english in some of your stuff by the way because you use some of the tenses are wrong and a lot of the nouns you use don't match. But anyway thanks Thanks, I know that my english is bad...