No you're not defensive, I know that what I said isn't really nice.
Butyou wrote a love poems, and I've read so many poems like yours only on DA. I don't said that is a bad poems, not at all, butsomething that I can read in hundread exemplar isn't really original.
But I've don't read many poems on Da, I'm maybe wrong.
And for the way you treat the content, you talk directly about love, there is no real subtlety.
It's a style of poem that I don't really like, I don't know what you're goal in writting so I said you my ownopinion and why I don't like it.